The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 22 – Haiku in Motion

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 Day 22’s prompt is “paint the picture” and here is the picture:

 Haiku in motion
Raised hem, Shy feet decked
In hushed anklets she waits, poised, 
anticipating
With bated breath, she 
Tip toes across, creating 
haiku in motion
Strains of music float 
In the air, impelling both 
her feet to take wing

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 –  
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16 Comments

  1. Asni

    February 22, 2012 at 8:56 pm

    Very nicely crafted. Love it!

    • Vidya Sury

      February 23, 2012 at 6:09 pm

      Thank you, dear Asni

  2. Grace

    February 22, 2012 at 11:25 pm

    Perfect set…I like that haiku in motion and her feet to take wing ~

    • Vidya Sury

      February 23, 2012 at 6:09 pm

      Thank you, dear Grace!

  3. Nezzy

    February 22, 2012 at 7:30 pm

    Although the beautiful picture was still I could almost feel the dance of the haiku through my mind.

    A most wonderful job sweetie!!!

    God bless and have an amazin’ day!!! :o)

    • Vidya Sury

      February 23, 2012 at 6:08 pm

      Thank you, dearest Nezzy! I love it when you come over! Here’s wishing you a grand day, too!

  4. Cloaked Monk/Terri

    February 22, 2012 at 11:33 pm

    Nice…haiku in motion.

    • Vidya Sury

      February 23, 2012 at 6:11 pm

      Thank you, dear Terri!

  5. SweetTalkingGuy

    February 23, 2012 at 1:04 am

    Yeah, nicely! I like the thought of Haiku in motion!

    • Vidya Sury

      February 23, 2012 at 6:12 pm

      Thank you, Andy! Your haiku is a special pleasure to read!

  6. becca givens

    February 23, 2012 at 1:18 am

    Haiku in motion … how could we resist?

    Very nice trio — my favorite is the last one!! Bravo!!!
    Here is my Day 22.

    • Vidya Sury

      February 23, 2012 at 6:11 pm

      :-) Becca, thank you very much. Your words are very encouraging! Loved your set!

  7. Kimberly

    February 23, 2012 at 4:25 pm

    So lovely. I could picture the dance in my mind. You are so gifted my friend.

    • Vidya Sury

      February 23, 2012 at 6:10 pm

      Thank you, KImberly. I find it odd to think I actually learned classical dance for a year :D Lovely experience!

  8. My Inner Chick

    February 24, 2012 at 12:27 am

    L O V E L Y.

    **Tip toes across, creating
    haiku in motion**

    Xxxx

  9. Someone is Special

    February 23, 2012 at 11:28 pm

    perfect! let the wings fly…