The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 22 – Haiku in Motion

Feb 22

 Day 22’s prompt is “paint the picture” and here is the picture:

 Haiku in motion
Raised hem, Shy feet decked
In hushed anklets she waits, poised, 
anticipating
With bated breath, she 
Tip toes across, creating 
haiku in motion
Strains of music float 
In the air, impelling both 
her feet to take wing

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 –  
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16 comments

  1. Very nicely crafted. Love it!

  2. Perfect set…I like that haiku in motion and her feet to take wing ~

  3. Although the beautiful picture was still I could almost feel the dance of the haiku through my mind.

    A most wonderful job sweetie!!!

    God bless and have an amazin’ day!!! :o)

  4. Nice…haiku in motion.

  5. Yeah, nicely! I like the thought of Haiku in motion!

  6. Haiku in motion … how could we resist?

    Very nice trio — my favorite is the last one!! Bravo!!!
    Here is my Day 22.

  7. So lovely. I could picture the dance in my mind. You are so gifted my friend.

    • Thank you, KImberly. I find it odd to think I actually learned classical dance for a year :D Lovely experience!

  8. My Inner Chick /

    L O V E L Y.

    **Tip toes across, creating
    haiku in motion**

    Xxxx

  9. perfect! let the wings fly…