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The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 4 – Opposite Emotions

The prompt for today’s haiku is “opposite emotions”

Day 4:

Farewell
Tears of joy escaped
Unbidden. Goodbye sadness
Hello happiness
Her cheerful smile hid
An inner turmoil raging
Under the surface

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 4 – February 4th – Theme: Opposite Emotions



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15 Comments

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    Someone is Special
    February 4, 2012 at 8:41 pm

    Loved it so much 🙂 A perfect combo for the theme..

    Someone is Special

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    Grace
    February 4, 2012 at 6:35 pm

    Those farewells are such hard to bear  ~

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    Nicolewian
    February 4, 2012 at 8:08 pm

    I loved this!

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    becca givens
    February 4, 2012 at 8:55 pm

    Very nice! 🙂

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    joychristin
    February 5, 2012 at 1:40 am

    Vidya: so beautiful, so inspiring…may I try? She feels her heart break…As he walks into the night…Leaving her alone.  Love and gratitude…Transform the deep pain into…overflowing joy. 

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    unknownmami
    February 5, 2012 at 2:47 am

    The second part could have been written about me. 

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    Vidya Sury
    February 5, 2012 at 1:37 pm

    Thank you, Amber!

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    Vidya Sury
    February 5, 2012 at 1:38 pm

    Hugs, Unknown Mami. I was thinking of me when I wrote it.

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    Vidya Sury
    February 5, 2012 at 1:39 pm

    Joy, thank you for visiting. Your verse is so lyrical! Hugs! You know I love your writing!

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    Vidya Sury
    February 5, 2012 at 1:39 pm

    Thanks Becca!

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    Vidya Sury
    February 5, 2012 at 1:39 pm

    Thanks for the kind words, Saravana!

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    Vidya Sury
    February 5, 2012 at 1:40 pm

    Glad you did, Nicolewian!

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    Vidya Sury
    February 5, 2012 at 1:40 pm

    Yes,  farewells break my heart, Grace!

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    Amber
    February 5, 2012 at 9:07 am

    Nice! I like “goodbye sadness hello happiness”. 🙂

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    Terri Sonoda
    February 5, 2012 at 6:12 pm

    Lovely as always!  And compelling…so many emotions.  I would love to know your inspiration for this one.

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