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The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 10 – Unforgettable

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Day 10 – Prompt: Write a haiku describing a special day in your life.

Oh, I have many many special days in my life. Two are etched in my joy list for ever! The day Vidur was born and the day he said “Ma” for the first time.

Day 10:

Unforgettable
I held my baby 
in my arms for the first time
I was born again
My bundle of joy 
With his little hand in mine   
spoke his first word “Ma”
Sept 27, 2001
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Cheers!

Vidya


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16 Comments

  1. Terri Sonoda Terri Sonoda February 10, 2012

    Every Mom can relate to this one. Loved it Vidya! You’re an amazing Haiku writer. Heck, you’re an amazing writer, period. HUGZZZ

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 11, 2012

      Thanks, Terri. This one was very easy for me. How our babies twist us around their cute little finger! You just sent me to cloud 9 with those compliments!

  2. Amber Amber February 10, 2012

    Two very very very special days!!! Loved them! 🙂 <3

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 11, 2012

      Hugs, Amber! Thank you!

  3. becca givens becca givens February 10, 2012

    Special day … Wonderful tribute … wonderful bond!!

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 11, 2012

      Thank you, dear Becca!

  4. Someone is Special Someone is Special February 10, 2012

    what a beautiful feeling it could be.. precious mom, precious son..

    Someone is Special

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 11, 2012

      It was a pleasure to write this, Saravana, thank you so much!

  5. farouk farouk February 11, 2012

    that’s touching Vidya:)

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 11, 2012

      Welcome and thank you, Farouk!

  6. FLOWINGEVENTS FLOWINGEVENTS February 11, 2012

    Very nice Haiku.. I like this kind of Small poetry.

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 12, 2012

      Thank you for dropping by, Flowingevents and for your kind comment!

  7. My Inner Chick My Inner Chick February 11, 2012

    “Born Again”

    You are such a lovely Mama. Xxxx Kissssss.

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 12, 2012

      Thank you, dear Kim! We believe that when delivering a baby, the mother herself is reborn :-D, as it is such a life-changing experience!

  8. zephyr zephyr February 12, 2012

    No matter what we were or become, this is one title and status all mothers cherish, don’t we? Loved the born again part 🙂

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 12, 2012

      Absolutely, Zephyr! My mother’s words about “maru piravi” keep ringing in my ears! I had a difficult birth.

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