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The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 11 – Vision

by Vidya Sury February 11, 2012 13 comments
It is Day 11 and the prompt is: write a haiku inspired by this image:
Day 11:
Vision
She gifted him sight
Gave the windows to her soul
Love is indeed blind.
He borrowed her eyes
Through them she saw again, the
beauty of this world
Pledge your eyes today
leave a legacy that will
make you immortal

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 11 – February 11th – Theme: Paint the Image
Inspirational Image by: Narayana Nethralaya

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Terri Sonoda February 11, 2012 at 11:33 pm

Vidya, that was just lovely…beyond words. And the picture was breathtaking. You have such a beautiful soul, I believe, my friend. HUGS

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Vidya Sury February 12, 2012 at 4:41 am

Thanks, Terri. I am sensitive about sight especially as I have severe astigmatism and short sight :D!You say such lovely things – Hugs!

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Emily February 12, 2012 at 5:29 am

It took me awhile before I could understand what was happening in that picture, but I loved your haikus. I thought the second one was especially powerful with the strength of its imagery and the lovely message. Well done!

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becca givens February 12, 2012 at 12:57 am

The gift of sight is immeasurable and a wonderful legacy. Thank you for the timely message!

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Vidya Sury February 12, 2012 at 4:42 am

Thank you, Becca. I shudder to think of no eyes!

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Evelyn Lim February 12, 2012 at 9:29 am

I enjoyed this one about sight and vision very much! Keep it going!

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Amber February 12, 2012 at 5:10 am

I like the way how you have used this prompt, Vidya ji. Sight is a blessing for which we can’t thank enough!

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farouk February 12, 2012 at 7:17 am

you are talented Vidya:)

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Vidya Sury February 12, 2012 at 7:44 am

Thank you Farouk! You have an amazing site too! I just visited it. I am happy we connected!

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Tarang Sinha February 12, 2012 at 9:00 am

Such a nice set of haiku spreading profound message:)

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Someone is Special February 12, 2012 at 11:19 am

Let everyone be immortal Vidya.. Loved it..

Someone is Special

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My Inner Chick February 13, 2012 at 1:00 am

I shall title you the “”Haiku Queen””

Xxx Wonderful.

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Kimberly February 13, 2012 at 2:03 pm

Can i just say that I look forward to reading these every day?
xoox

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