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The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 22 – Haiku in Motion

by Vidya Sury February 22, 2012 16 comments
woman wearing pink dress

Day 22’s prompt is “paint the picture”

Haiku in motion

Raised hem, Shy feet decked
In hushed anklets she waits, poised,
anticipating

With bated breath, she
Tiptoes across, creating
haiku in motion

Strains of music float
In the air, impelling both
her feet to take wing

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 –
Day 22 – February 22nd – Theme: Paint the Image…

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Asni February 22, 2012 at 8:56 pm

Very nicely crafted. Love it!

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Vidya Sury February 23, 2012 at 6:09 pm

Thank you, dear Asni

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Grace February 22, 2012 at 11:25 pm

Perfect set…I like that haiku in motion and her feet to take wing ~

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Vidya Sury February 23, 2012 at 6:09 pm

Thank you, dear Grace!

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Nezzy February 22, 2012 at 7:30 pm

Although the beautiful picture was still I could almost feel the dance of the haiku through my mind.

A most wonderful job sweetie!!!

God bless and have an amazin’ day!!! :o)

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Vidya Sury February 23, 2012 at 6:08 pm

Thank you, dearest Nezzy! I love it when you come over! Here’s wishing you a grand day, too!

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SweetTalkingGuy February 23, 2012 at 1:04 am

Yeah, nicely! I like the thought of Haiku in motion!

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Vidya Sury February 23, 2012 at 6:12 pm

Thank you, Andy! Your haiku is a special pleasure to read!

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Cloaked Monk/Terri February 22, 2012 at 11:33 pm

Nice…haiku in motion.

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Vidya Sury February 23, 2012 at 6:11 pm

Thank you, dear Terri!

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becca givens February 23, 2012 at 1:18 am

Haiku in motion … how could we resist?

Very nice trio — my favorite is the last one!! Bravo!!!
Here is my Day 22.

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Vidya Sury February 23, 2012 at 6:11 pm

🙂 Becca, thank you very much. Your words are very encouraging! Loved your set!

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Kimberly February 23, 2012 at 4:25 pm

So lovely. I could picture the dance in my mind. You are so gifted my friend.

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Vidya Sury February 23, 2012 at 6:10 pm

Thank you, KImberly. I find it odd to think I actually learned classical dance for a year 😀 Lovely experience!

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My Inner Chick February 24, 2012 at 12:27 am

L O V E L Y.

**Tip toes across, creating
haiku in motion**

Xxxx

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Someone is Special February 23, 2012 at 11:28 pm

perfect! let the wings fly…

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