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The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 22 – Haiku in Motion

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Day 22’s prompt is “paint the picture”

Haiku in motion

Raised hem, Shy feet decked
In hushed anklets she waits, poised,
anticipating

With bated breath, she
Tiptoes across, creating
haiku in motion

Strains of music float
In the air, impelling both
her feet to take wing

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 –
Day 22 – February 22nd – Theme: Paint the Image…


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16 Comments

  1. Asni Asni February 22, 2012

    Very nicely crafted. Love it!

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 23, 2012

      Thank you, dear Asni

  2. Grace Grace February 22, 2012

    Perfect set…I like that haiku in motion and her feet to take wing ~

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 23, 2012

      Thank you, dear Grace!

  3. Nezzy Nezzy February 22, 2012

    Although the beautiful picture was still I could almost feel the dance of the haiku through my mind.

    A most wonderful job sweetie!!!

    God bless and have an amazin’ day!!! :o)

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 23, 2012

      Thank you, dearest Nezzy! I love it when you come over! Here’s wishing you a grand day, too!

  4. SweetTalkingGuy SweetTalkingGuy February 23, 2012

    Yeah, nicely! I like the thought of Haiku in motion!

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 23, 2012

      Thank you, Andy! Your haiku is a special pleasure to read!

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 23, 2012

      Thank you, dear Terri!

  5. becca givens becca givens February 23, 2012

    Haiku in motion … how could we resist?

    Very nice trio — my favorite is the last one!! Bravo!!!
    Here is my Day 22.

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 23, 2012

      🙂 Becca, thank you very much. Your words are very encouraging! Loved your set!

  6. Kimberly Kimberly February 23, 2012

    So lovely. I could picture the dance in my mind. You are so gifted my friend.

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 23, 2012

      Thank you, KImberly. I find it odd to think I actually learned classical dance for a year 😀 Lovely experience!

  7. My Inner Chick My Inner Chick February 24, 2012

    L O V E L Y.

    **Tip toes across, creating
    haiku in motion**

    Xxxx

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