The prompt for today’s haiku is “opposite emotions”
Day 4:
Farewell
Tears of joy escaped
Unbidden. Goodbye sadness
Hello happiness
Her cheerful smile hid
An inner turmoil raging
Under the surface
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 4 – February 4th – Theme: Opposite Emotions
Vidya Sury
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15 comments
Loved it so much 🙂 A perfect combo for the theme..
Someone is Special
Those farewells are such hard to bear ~
I loved this!
Very nice! 🙂
Vidya: so beautiful, so inspiring…may I try? She feels her heart break…As he walks into the night…Leaving her alone. Love and gratitude…Transform the deep pain into…overflowing joy.
The second part could have been written about me.
Thank you, Amber!
Hugs, Unknown Mami. I was thinking of me when I wrote it.
Joy, thank you for visiting. Your verse is so lyrical! Hugs! You know I love your writing!
Thanks Becca!
Thanks for the kind words, Saravana!
Glad you did, Nicolewian!
Yes, farewells break my heart, Grace!
Nice! I like “goodbye sadness hello happiness”. 🙂
Lovely as always! And compelling…so many emotions. I would love to know your inspiration for this one.