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The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 26 – Food For Thought

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For Day 26, the haiku challenge prompt is “Paint any one of the images” out of two images. Never one to leave out something, intentionally, at least, I will attempt to write for both. Here are the photos. They make me very sad. I cannot bear to see children suffer and especially if they go hungry. I try and do my bit to contribute regularly to the orphanages I know and hope to do a lot more in my lifetime.

Food for Thought I

Buds fed up with life
will they bloom? Is adulthood,
health a fantasy?

Is the staircase their
future? If they get up where
will they go? The streets?

Food for Thought II

Beware, innocent
child. The world is a mirage
You are food for thought

Perfectly laid out
Platter to deceive taste-buds
Are you the main course?

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 26 – February 26th – Theme: Paint the Image


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26 Comments

  1. Grace Grace February 26, 2012

    Very nice set…I like that you did write for both pictures.

    Much enjoyed your writing ~

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 28, 2012

      Thank you,Grace! I appreciate your comment!

  2. becca givens becca givens February 26, 2012

    As you know, Vidya, I could not take these heart-wrenching images down the path of realism … you did better than me! Thank you for sharing your perspective.

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 28, 2012

      I almost skipped this prompt, Becca. The images make me cry. I somehow managed to actually post. Sigh. Thank you, Becca!

  3. Cressida de Nova Cressida de Nova February 27, 2012

    These are both good but the second one makes a startling impact.The exploitation of children in the third world is appalling and you make a powerful statement here.Well done!

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 28, 2012

      It is terrible to see children anything but happy, Cressida!Thank you for your kind comment!

  4. nicolewian nicolewian February 26, 2012

    Powerful last line in that first one!

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 28, 2012

      Thanks, Nicole! These photos break my heart!

  5. SweetTalkingGuy SweetTalkingGuy February 27, 2012

    Phew, you’re making me cry now! Maybe the staircase is their stairway to heaven! May god bless them!!!

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 28, 2012

      Thank you, Andy. I have lots of tissue here. I hate to see children suffering!

  6. sonsylass sonsylass February 27, 2012

    I agree with Becca, Vidya – very well done. The second has that element of interest and intrigue that makes me want to read it over again 🙂

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 28, 2012

      Thank you, @Sonsylass – I really appreciate your comment!

  7. Kimberly Kimberly February 27, 2012

    This made me so incredibly sad.
    Those poor beautiful children. I want to just reach through the computer screen and love on them.

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 28, 2012

      That is because you’re such a wonderful person, Kimberly! Thank you for your beautiful thought! Hugs!

  8. Lisa @ Grandma's Briefs Lisa @ Grandma's Briefs February 27, 2012

    That first one just breaks my heart. There’s so much that we take for granted.

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 28, 2012

      Dear Lisa, I know. 🙁 Hungry + Children just don’t make a combination for me. Thank you so much for stopping by!

  9. Tarang Sinha Tarang Sinha February 27, 2012

    Perceptive set of haiku, especially the first two:)

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury March 3, 2012

      Thank you so much, Tarang!

  10. zephyr zephyr February 28, 2012

    Raw and gnawing — as hunger, as pain. They are indeed the main course. I am crying, Vidya.

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 28, 2012

      I know, Zephyr. Scenes like the first picture are all too common, too real for comfort. The tears flow unchecked for me.

      Glad you dropped by!

  11. My Inner Chick My Inner Chick February 28, 2012

    Vidya,
    You continually move me & cause me to ponder.

    Thank you for your friendship, beauty, & love.

    Xxx

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury March 3, 2012

      Darling Kim, I so appreciate your love and warmth. Thank you so much!

  12. zongrik zongrik February 29, 2012

    is their staircase their future? very grim indeed

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury March 3, 2012

      Yes! Bat-Ami – scary thought. But that’s life around us. Too common for our comfort. Thanks for visiting!

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