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The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 3 – Paint the image

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Today’s haiku prompt is “paint the picture”
  
Day 3:
Worldly-wise
Balanced on a stick
Wrinkles of experience
Speak louder than words.

Years of observing
Passers-by taught him lessons
outside the classroom.

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 3 – February 3rd – Theme: Paint the Image
Photo Clicked by Anand of: Apple Blossom’s Photography

Vidya Sury

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Vidya


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18 Comments

  1. Terri Sonoda Terri Sonoda February 3, 2012

    I have chills from this one.    I’m not surprised that you notice (and care about!)  people the way you do.  I wish I knew more people like you.  It seems no one notices the less-fortunate, the elderly, etc., these days, for their unique contributions.  You do.  That’s just one of the many things I love about you, my friend.
    Keep those haikus coming!

  2. Someone is Special Someone is Special February 3, 2012

    an experience taught outside the classroom.. Touching one vidya..

    Someone is Special

  3. Amber Amber February 3, 2012

    They do speak louder than words!
    WOW for the second one!

  4. Taylor Taylor February 3, 2012

    super lovely.

  5. becca givens becca givens February 3, 2012

    The “worldly experience” often outweighs the classroom … some of the most intelligent, well read people I know, never completed high school … 

  6. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 4, 2012

    Thank you Betsy 🙂 I am having fun writing it. It is a long time since I wrote any poetry 😀 I appreciate you  sharing yesterday’s post! Hugs!

  7. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 4, 2012

    Indeed, Andy. Hmm. now why didn’t i think of that? 😀 

  8. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 4, 2012

    Thank you, Saravana. 

  9. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 4, 2012

    Right, Becca! 🙂 Often, it is what life teaches us that’s more significant than what we learn by rote in a classroom!

  10. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 4, 2012

    Thank you, Taylor. I can’t stop laughing at your photo of the cat’s tail in the fish’s mouth. 😀 Talk about real “Fail”!

  11. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 4, 2012

    Thank you, Amber! 🙂 The second one was a quick after-thought, really. Glad you liked it!

  12. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 4, 2012

    Thank you, Terri! Such kind words. So many people touch our lives. And yes, I too feel sad about the elderly and the less fortunate not being taken seriously.  I grew up with a terrific grandmother and had the privilege of being in a joint family. Also, a family that had people forever helping the community we lived in. 🙂  and a family that never differentiated others by their status. I am lucky. To come from a background like that, and doubly lucky to have you for a friend.  I feel so encouraged by your wonderful comments, Terri. Hugs.

  13. andy sewina andy sewina February 3, 2012

    The university of life, perhaps?

  14. Betsy @ Zen Mama Betsy @ Zen Mama February 4, 2012

    Im really enjoying all your poetry.  Your mother’s poem yesterday was especially moving!

  15. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 4, 2012

    Thank you, Kim. Am so enjoying doing this. And am happy you like it too! Hugs.

  16. My Inner Chick My Inner Chick February 4, 2012

    –Vidya,
    I absolutely love your Haikus.
    **Wrinkles of experience
    Speak louder than words.**

    You Thrill me :)) Xxx Love to you today.

    My Inner Chick  http://myinnerchick.com

  17. Kimberly Kimberly February 5, 2012

    OMG…I’m going to stab your commenting systemSeriously.Why is it so prejudice against me…wahhhhhh… LOLTHis is so lovely.Love every word.And the picture paired with it is just beautiful

  18. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 5, 2012

    😀 I know how you feel. Thank you and Hugs! The commenting system behaved this time. I really appreciate your patience. 

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