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The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 11 – Vision

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It is Day 11 and the prompt is: write a haiku inspired by this image:
Day 11:
Vision
She gifted him sight
Gave the windows to her soul
Love is indeed blind.
He borrowed her eyes
Through them she saw again, the
beauty of this world
Pledge your eyes today
leave a legacy that will
make you immortal

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 11 – February 11th – Theme: Paint the Image
Inspirational Image by: Narayana Nethralaya

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Vidya


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13 Comments

  1. Terri Sonoda Terri Sonoda February 11, 2012

    Vidya, that was just lovely…beyond words. And the picture was breathtaking. You have such a beautiful soul, I believe, my friend. HUGS

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 12, 2012

      Thanks, Terri. I am sensitive about sight especially as I have severe astigmatism and short sight :D!You say such lovely things – Hugs!

  2. Emily Emily February 12, 2012

    It took me awhile before I could understand what was happening in that picture, but I loved your haikus. I thought the second one was especially powerful with the strength of its imagery and the lovely message. Well done!

  3. becca givens becca givens February 12, 2012

    The gift of sight is immeasurable and a wonderful legacy. Thank you for the timely message!

    • Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 12, 2012

      Thank you, Becca. I shudder to think of no eyes!

  4. Evelyn Lim Evelyn Lim February 12, 2012

    I enjoyed this one about sight and vision very much! Keep it going!

  5. Amber Amber February 12, 2012

    I like the way how you have used this prompt, Vidya ji. Sight is a blessing for which we can’t thank enough!

  6. farouk farouk February 12, 2012

    you are talented Vidya:)

  7. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury February 12, 2012

    Thank you Farouk! You have an amazing site too! I just visited it. I am happy we connected!

  8. Tarang Sinha Tarang Sinha February 12, 2012

    Such a nice set of haiku spreading profound message:)

  9. Someone is Special Someone is Special February 12, 2012

    Let everyone be immortal Vidya.. Loved it..

    Someone is Special

  10. My Inner Chick My Inner Chick February 13, 2012

    I shall title you the “”Haiku Queen””

    Xxx Wonderful.

  11. Kimberly Kimberly February 13, 2012

    Can i just say that I look forward to reading these every day?
    xoox

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